The Silent Poet

[Mr. Robin Parsons]

© Mr. Robin Parsons :cool: Kingston Ontario Canada MMVI

There once was a Poet
Whom themselves didn't know it
so they decided instead to remain Silent.

Then they spoke in their head
Much safer it was said
As it was All known to be totally Non-Violent.

But of what did he speak
Why the tears did he leak
when all knew the truth of the Pilot.

It was then that he said
still inside his head
"Roses are red..." all the others are violet.

For all that they knew
the tear of sorrow it grew
Falling from the head of creation.

The sorrow he knew
that sorrow we grew
It comes from our own damnation

He felt it inside
that truth that wouldn't hide
didn't they all know that sensation?

It rests in their hearts
Pulses beats and vibrating parts
They needed to know the relation

It is God in that stead
as well as in your head
The sound of the inner Harmonic

But they fool themselves
play the scamps and the elves
resulting in that wanton Demonic

If instead of that lie
the truth from there eye
then they would know what was needed

As honest as can be
As true to self in All you see
That is the manner then it is seeded

With that knowledge in you
Go out now Be True!
You hearts' sorrows soon will be weeded

When the heart comes to that gate
the message will have been GREAT
Spared yourself from the slaughter

Tell friend and foe & Father
Tell your son Child & Daughter
it is the Sound of your life ...in the water.

[poetessmisty]

very nicely done. Thank you for sharing

[Mr. Robin Parsons]

very nicely done. Thank you for sharingThank you. :cool:

[poetessmisty]

You're very welcome, and yes I think that critiques of any nature is inspiration in itself. I didn't have time before to break down verse by verse, but now I have a few, so here goes:




There once was a Poet
Whom themselves didn't know it
so they decided instead to remain Silent.

Then they spoke in their head
Much safer it was said -------------> Meter seems a little off here.
As it was All known to be totally Non-Violent.

But of what did he speak
Why the tears did he leak
when all knew the truth of the Pilot.

It was then that he said
still inside his head
"Roses are red..." all the others are violet.--------> I absolutely LOVE this line

For all that they knew
the tear of sorrow it grew
Falling from the head of creation.

The sorrow he knew
that sorrow we grew
It comes from our own damnation--------> nice

He felt it inside
that truth that wouldn't hide
didn't they all know that sensation?

It rests in their hearts
Pulses beats and vibrating parts-------> nice reference to vibrations
They needed to know the relation

It is God in that stead
as well as in your head
The sound of the inner Harmonic

But they fool themselves
play the scamps and the elves
resulting in that wanton Demonic

If instead of that lie
the truth from there eye
then they would know what was needed

As honest as can be
As true to self in All you see
That is the manner then it is seeded

With that knowledge in you
Go out now Be True!-----------> Hit the emotion home on this one
You hearts' sorrows soon will be weeded

When the heart comes to that gate
the message will have been GREAT
Spared yourself from the slaughter

Tell friend and foe & Father
Tell your son Child & Daughter
it is the Sound of your life ...in the water.----------> Very very nice ending.

I, myself am not Christian, but I appreciate the message. Again, thank you for sharing

Misty

[Mr. Robin Parsons]

It isn't meant as (Much) from 'Christian' as much as it is "Follower (Student) of God" (the truth)

Once again thanks ....again

[LeonSmile]

Damnedest thing, i know. I pretty sure i had made a number of TJNR appropriate remarks considering the section it was in at the time... now if only i could remember what i said.

Oh well, as soon as i remember, i will be sure to post it in there again.

[lenchnikin]

Im not sure about other fans, but I know what personally has me a little down is that it appears we now have two basis of the canon. On one hand you have SH0 and SH5 which is being made by an American company or English and those games will be released all over. Then you have the SH Arcade, and these comics. The comics so far being released only in Japan.

Its a sad situation where we the fans who dont know Japanese might be out of luck in knowing the rest of the canon.

Personally, I think that SH0 could be considered canon if they do it right.